Ruben Goldsbrough
The First Draft of my script
After weeks and weeks of hard work and research and planning I finially have a script! yes it may only still be a first draft but never the less its a start! I have a story to tell and a vision in my head that looks awesome! weather of not it comes out that way is a differant matter but i believe in myself!
The film will be tittled "What am i?". The story is a about a young girl coming to terms with herself over the space of 2 years. Though the film itself makes it feel much shorter than that. Our charecter remains nameless until becoming Jake mid way though the story. A story that i personal find very moving im looking forward to expermenting with visuals and making this a beautiful short film.
Here you will find a Pdf copy of my first script.
And here is the second draft.
This verson is slightly shorter. The biggest issue im having currently is that the script is so long! Im worried that is may turn into a longer film that intended BUT i dont want to take too much out and loose the story and offend the person who it belongs too.
Third draft right here!
again having the same issues as the second draft, i've cut it down but its still too long!!
Forth draft!
Cut it down a little more, im happy with it... almost.
5th Draft
It's almost perfect now... almost perfect. Just a few more tiny tweek and it hopfully should be done.
6th and finial draft!!
now its perfect! lets record!
Its been such a long process but I'm so happy to say that i now acually have a script to work from. It may need altering again once we have started recording as it may not read right. BUT heres hoping that everything goes to plan! I'll keep you posted
7th and i'm about 95% sure my finial draft!!
I had a few issues with some wording once we started recording along. Now that has altered it should hopefully be good to go (last updated December 17th)
Draft 8... So I was wrong! The Script was still too long, so i took to it once again and edited it down.
Draft 9. This is 150% the last copy of my script, everything has been check twice and I am very very happy with the finial cut.
(last updated June 2017)